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School Days

I remember Sister Marie Claire
I feel the chill through my spine and the hair

I remember the ruler hitting my head
When I approached the board with dread

Math was a subject I wanted to go away
Hoping that it would be over each and every day

She was a woman with a mission in mind
Also a lady who would often be unkind

Those days are just a memory now
As a teacher myself I now know how

Kindness keeps kids wanting to stay
Willing to learn more each day

Not afraid to ask when they do not know
Seeking help from a person with a bright glow

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Early school remembered

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Rula

Rula

1 week 4 days ago

This is a true lesson for…

This is a true lesson for every teacher. Kindness/humanity is absolutely a must trait in teachers who want to raise a generation. It's not about learning and teaching subjects, but also raising a Man .

If I may suggest, the opening lines.feel a bit awkward for me

I suggest something like


Everytime I remember Sister Marie Claire

 I feel the chill through my spine and the hair.

Jut for a tighter rhythm

Thank you for sharing 

Geezer

Geezer

1 week 3 days ago

Clentin Is your...

button stuck? I suggest that your piece could use a little bit of a trim in some lines.