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Dec 06, 2025
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Close Call with Fate
In my dream last night,
I was Johnny Cash, the Man in Black.
And as Johnny Cash, I considered
wearing shorts to my next show.
Luckily, June, my gifted and tasteful wife,
handed me another pair of black trousers,
and recommended never having this thought again.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: No idea what triggered this dream - LOL!
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
William Lynn
4 months 2 weeks ago
Thank You
I suspect your wife is due a big THANK YOU! Unfortunately, I too have some very strange dreams and wearing shorts when inappropriate is just a sad beginning.
Thanks for sharing. - Will
Lavender
4 months 2 weeks ago
Close Call with Fate
Hello, Michael,
I love my dreams. They're almost always wild and fun, and it sounds like yours are pretty funny, too!
Thank you!
L