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Close Call with Fate

In my dream last night,
I was Johnny Cash, the Man in Black.

And as Johnny Cash, I considered
wearing shorts to my next show.

Luckily, June, my gifted and tasteful wife,
handed me another pair of black trousers,
and recommended never having this thought again.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: No idea what triggered this dream - LOL!

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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William Lynn

William Lynn

4 months 2 weeks ago

Thank You

I suspect your wife is due a big THANK YOU! Unfortunately, I too have some very strange dreams and wearing shorts when inappropriate is just a sad beginning.

Thanks for sharing. - Will

Lavender

Lavender

4 months 2 weeks ago

Close Call with Fate

Hello, Michael, 

I love my dreams. They're almost always wild and fun, and it sounds like yours are pretty funny, too! 

Thank you!

L