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The Door I Didn't Slam
I knew I tried to do my best to be honest
But sometimes some relationships don’t pan out
Even if there’s a light amidst kindred spirits
Feelings can dry up and go into a drought
And maybe it was the times and those days of youth
Like a rollercoaster – emotions ran wild
One day we’re all laughing and the next we’re crying
One day I’m wanted and the next I’m exiled
But I didn’t get mad that one time I got burned
Instead I let tears wash over me like rain
It teared and inspired me like some work of art
Letting my heart sink I delved into the pain
Broken and mended I learned to be resilient
I didn’t fully understand it at that time
But some of life lessons need to be experienced
So that it molds us and shapes us into our prime
Today I remember the door I didn’t slam
That day I walked away with my head held up high
It’s a forgotten memory of love and youth
Like the wings of a verse watching the time fly by
About This Poem
Last Few Words: NaPoWriMo2026 Day 12
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Candlewitch
1 week 4 days ago
Dear Wallyroo,
So true, the words of your poem...we transmute the pain of an experience into wisdom and growth. If we are strong and honest with ourselves. I am glad I read this piece of truth!
Thanks for sharing this. Fondly, Cat