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Jun 04, 2007
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The Wind
The wind rustles the leaves
that overlook my place
A beautiful sky peers
in the distance
Lost but not looking
for the right way
The wind rustles the leaves
that look upon me
A beautiful sky
that lingers in place
Lost, but still looking
for my right way
— Mistyone, Jun 04, 2007
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Mistyone
19 years ago
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