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Haiku Haiku

Five beats for the line
seven beats for the big lie
last line also five.

— Conect11, Jun 10, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

19 years ago

Rhyming haiku?

Five rhymes for the times Seven vodkas, ice and limes Five poems five dimes
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Conect11

19 years ago

ah!

excellent stuff, weirdelf!

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