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Jun 14, 2007
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my word of holy caution
my
word
of
holy
caution
think of God's advance in years, I say,
when setting down yourself to pray;
that p’raps He’s turned life’s page
and come hard to hear in His old age.
oh, heed my cautionary word:
though you may think the thought absurd,
there may be more than hell to pay.
there’s risk in mumbled, unclear prayer
that finds God's ears but poorly heard …
by God or any passing bat or bird.
when those words you choose---hey-hey!---
are wrongly heard by God at night or day,
oh, heed my cautionary word;
though you may think the thought absurd,
there may be more than hell to pay.
— barbsdad2003, Jun 14, 2007
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barbsdad2003
19 years ago
Wow!
barbsdad2003
18 years 12 months ago
to explain it ...
dbaker
18 years 12 months ago
Hahaha..got it.
barbsdad2003
18 years 12 months ago
It Is Difficult
weirdelf
18 years 12 months ago
From a profoundly committed spiritual atheist
barbsdad2003
18 years ago
You Got It Just Fine!
whitetea
18 years ago
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Arrow
18 years ago
I like this, too. The older
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