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Jun 16, 2007
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Smalt Skies/Blue Moon
beneath smalt skies of June
hangs there a pale-blue moon
awaits the night
without sun’s light---
sans cloaking shawl
or filt’ring pall---
somewhere ‘bove Rangoon …
or p’raps o’erlooking somewhat
a tamed Vermont.
moon’s patience dimmed,
her silence mute and gaunt---
to gnostic eye,
her face light-limned---
she bides her time within
accounting for her sin
till dimps has pulled
his holey curtain then,
when she not longer waits
for night to fall.
— barbsdad2003, Jun 16, 2007
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barbsdad2003
18 years 12 months ago
careful, Joe
weirdelf
18 years 12 months ago
Stretching yourself... cool
barbsdad2003
18 years 12 months ago
Thanx for asking
Conect11
18 years 12 months ago
your poem
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