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barbsdad2003
Jun 16, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

underpents

a busy poet once incurred
some nonstrategic rents
 
in his sulf’rous underpents
 
that poor guy aborted then
the penning of this here poem
 
for to sew ‘em

— barbsdad2003, Jun 16, 2007

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Conect11

18 years 12 months ago

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I've really been enjoying your work, but have to be honest. This one didn't grab me as much. Of course, it's 7 A.M. on a Sunday, so frankly if Shakespeare, Tennyson, and the 1948 Cleveland Indians all showed up in my living room that wouldn't impress me right now, neither.
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dbaker

18 years 12 months ago

Your Piece

don't be insulted, I mean this in a good way.."Cute" I think it shows you have very creative mind. With a dash of cynicism. I liked this piece a lot. -David Work, stretch, take risks, visualize your future. Become the poet you have always longed to be. All that is needed is honest effort.-DSB
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barbsdad2003

18 years 12 months ago

thanx

cute's what this old man was looking for ---Chuck
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barbsdad2003

18 years 12 months ago

i can tell

you have a fine mind, as do many who laugh at what I write---or say (sorry about the implied put-down here with the as do many I get that you're unique---and I'm only too happy to honor and support that reality) thanks PS: I think your nuff sed (or maybe nuffsed) would be a good handle, esp. at this site

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