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I'm Sure What's True He Bent

 
 
For Me ’tis Plain to see---
and quite Self-evident---
God is and always was irrelevant.
 
When a Bible’s tale-teller
(if I may aptly vent,
I’m sure what’s true he Bent!)
 
acknowledged God
(a concept really Very Odd),
for the life of Me,
 
I dunno what the Hell he meant.

— barbsdad2003, Jun 18, 2007

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IKnowNoBox

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If Jesus were a philoshapor

Would he have died for Nothing? That was in the back of my head . Chuck sure does make it fun to Go Back There (laughing all the way some times even going HUH? In Ink, Dabbler

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