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my word!

 
 
I deem it dandy
To be word-handy.
 
(Suggested criticisms
for the above:
 
1) too short
2) way too short
3) not long enough
4) needs expanding
5) cute
6) prissy title
7) don’t need
a dictionary for
getting it
8) so what?!)

— barbsdad2003, Jun 21, 2007

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barbsdad2003

18 years 11 months ago

Thanx

Many thanx for your assistance. Valuable---as usual. Yours, Chuckles

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