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barbsdad2003
Jun 22, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

on being thankful

 
 
my ship came in
 
and she
brought me
 
what I ordered,
a load of sin

— barbsdad2003, Jun 22, 2007

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Rottiestyl

Rottiestyl

18 years 11 months ago

Did you win

the lottery? Another little thinker. You are slowly wiping the webs asides in my head. Not sure that is a good thing this early on a Sunday! Loved it! K. Mulroney

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