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Nana

 
 
my dear, dear Nana,
now dead and buried
 
such an awfully 
long, long time ago,
 
do you really think
I have forgotten you?
 
on the contrary,
at your memory
 
my heart yet throbs:
 
I remember both you …
and the while you taught me—
 
a snot-nosed brown-eyed
dark-haired six-year-old—
 
so sweetly … thoughtfully
 
just how to proper
ope an olden book
 
of much-loved collections
of class’cal poetry
 
by a long-dead author,
at Arco’s public library

— barbsdad2003, Jun 25, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

Classical elegance

Despite your assertion that 19th century English literature is the peak of the form there something Japanese about the way you paint with a minimum of strokes cheers, Jess
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barbsdad2003

18 years 11 months ago

Thanx, Jess

I accept that (in my most proper way) as a compliment. And esp. coming from you, it means something. Yours, Chuck

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