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Jun 26, 2007
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O
this afternoon
my mouth formed its O
at the end of saying,
to my fine friend,
a friendly hello …
twice today
my face O’d …
the first was
this morning,
when I begged
for the loan
of his commode.
— barbsdad2003, Jun 26, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
am I missing something
barbsdad2003
18 years 11 months ago
on the need to stretch
Conect11
18 years 11 months ago
tsk tsk tsk
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