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she rained!

oh, by the way!

Mother Nature deigned,

 

on this very day,

 

to do something harebrained …

without once asking me:

 

she rained!

 

on my whim, and then caprice,

I implored her twice to cease,

 

which thought both times

she politely entertained;

 

though in each instance she

thoughtlessly refrained—

 

and with a wicked smile

much wider than a mile,

 

she rained!

— barbsdad2003, Jun 30, 2007

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stardream

18 years 11 months ago

she rained!

love it!

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