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Jun 30, 2007
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she rained!
oh, by the way!
Mother Nature deigned,
on this very day,
to do something harebrained …
without once asking me:
she rained!
on my whim, and then caprice,
I implored her twice to cease,
which thought both times
she politely entertained;
though in each instance she
thoughtlessly refrained—
and with a wicked smile
much wider than a mile,
she rained!
— barbsdad2003, Jun 30, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
my dear Chuck
Conect11
18 years 11 months ago
chucktacular!!!!
stardream
18 years 11 months ago
she rained!
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