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Jun 30, 2007
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as robin broods
I’m quite impressed
to see
that robin redbreast
(and without apology)
has made her nest
in my backyard’s apple tree—
with some finesse
(or its facsimile)—
outside my bedroom
window …
as robin broods
such dainty eggs,
she hides her legs—
and has me biding time
in limbo
— barbsdad2003, Jun 30, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
You do make me smile
pinksheep
18 years 11 months ago
As Robin Broods
barbsdad2003
18 years 11 months ago
Thanx for Noticing
Conect11
18 years 11 months ago
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