barbsdad2003

Jul 05, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

diddly-squat

if, in your manner and in

your thought,

tis virtue you had sought

ill-got,

the devil may’ve cared

diddly-squat

how you fared—

or not.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 05, 2007

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Country/Region: USA

Critiques

Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

clever

is your slight of hand when serious words your peers demand And pity I have for the unruly man your poems he can not understand!

barbsdad2003

18 years 11 months ago

I know I've commented on it before, but I would like to add that I think it's the No. 1, A-OK profile picture on this whole site. My congratulations. I do hope you paid the artist well. And perhaps a hefty tip besides? Yours as usual, Chuckles PS: I've come to love and respect your talent for spur-of-the-moment rhyming comments.

Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

I paid him

in installments... I have to provide him one bunch of bananas every week for 30 years...f*cking monkees.

Quillsvein1

18 years 11 months ago

Good

You really remind me of Emily Dickinson. That is a definitely a good thing--only a more male voice, naturally. Very neatly done.

JT1

18 years 11 months ago

No!

Emily was insane, is why she wrote from a true poetic heart, this poem here, I beg to differ...has other purposes for its write.

JT1

18 years 11 months ago

No

the Great War is the best poem ever!

JT1

18 years 11 months ago

Ne'et

t'voy poemet'a, o-jing klasiva, ne'et...lol...en 'esponal, ti mando bassitos, (loca y Dor-roac/dora,)In Red: sto-da-deal-ish, va-ta-vook ti ab-ei-san-ni po-pits-ka? A.k.a. in all lnguages, "Diddly Squat"...LAMO "slat-key-parum ChUcK!" Para coolo! beaso's Chuck...LMAO! @ u...cyber space translation.

barbsdad2003

18 years 11 months ago

Brilliant!

brilliant! brilliant! I spent my time, dint look for no rhyme, and enjoyed JT1's "Ne'et" posted comment right here online. Thanx, Chuckles

JT1

18 years 11 months ago

You

need stars, X5...I am here for your shelter...I will make everyting alraight, (you got money? 39 bucks for poetrysoup, they say I am a great poet, but need money for them to say so.) for this: I will see you thoughh, with lips warm and true, your poems, I will take them through the night...like your poetry, I will take you through the night....MSNCB...

Rottiestyl

18 years 11 months ago

Yep

Virtues aside, the devil is a squatter...lol! Has to have other little demons do his dirty work, now thats lazy! Loved this as usual you have me shaking my head as i'm thinking on it. K. Mulroney

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