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Jul 06, 2007
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I like shapes oblong
and quite significantly round
and the way fine lyrics
to my willing ear impress
their sweetest sound.
and I so love the critters that run wild,
and I so hate those awful things,
those things that need be filed.
now is the proper time,
I do think
(now you’ve had your flavored teaspoon drink),
for you to fly to bed, my child.
— barbsdad2003, Jul 06, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
you can be quite caustic
barbsdad2003
18 years 11 months ago
Nice Work in Your Three-Liner Here ... or Four-Liner
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