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crepe suzette

are you just a nudist,

or p’raps an absentminded flutist,

 

or did you not forget

to pirouette

 

to interpose

your discarded clothes

 

when on this a.m. you first arose

to scoff your omelette

 

with your crêpe suzette

 

and to peruse your home-delivered

and much-prized gazette?

— barbsdad2003, Jul 06, 2007

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chronecro

18 years 10 months ago

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You have tried to incorporate a diverse range of emotions into this, I fear to the death of all. I'd be interested in your explanation of the poem.

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