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Jul 07, 2007
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undesired
I’m so old and tired
and so undesired—
and so unadmired—
I ought to be fired.
I shouldn’t be rehired
for I’m all expired.
all systems no go
should be my logo.
— barbsdad2003, Jul 07, 2007
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Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
I relate
poet_inside
18 years 11 months ago
Good
Rottiestyl
18 years 11 months ago
Your killing me!
Rottiestyl
18 years 11 months ago
Your killing me!
Conect11
18 years 11 months ago
yeah,
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