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undesired

I’m so old and tired

and so undesired—

 

and so unadmired—

I ought to be fired.

 

I shouldn’t be rehired

for I’m all expired.

 

all systems no go

should be my logo.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 07, 2007

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Country/Region: USA

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poet_inside

18 years 11 months ago

Good

I like this I don't normaly like a of short poems unless they have a good point that comes across with just a few lines, I like it
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Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

yeah,

it sux getting old I spose. Lol, actually this hit a nerve:( I know the feeling. Mark

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