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Dream Screams

Baby in your nightmare dream.

I hold your hand, and it may seem.

You are all alone, with no one there.

But I am here, to love and care.

With your murmurings, and soft moans.

Ill chase away, those weary groans.

I am here to share, with you.

The horrors, of your nightmare blue.

I am brave, and do not easily scare.

So be assured, I‘m here to care.

I have been here, all your life.

To protect and shield you, from life’s strife.

To hold you lovingly, and say.

From your side, I shall not stray.

And when you need, a loving hand.

I’m here for you, and will understand.

So don’t be afraid, of those bad dreams.

For I will quiet-en, those horror screams.

And show you, there are those who care.

For you my baby Im here to share.

— kinganeye, Jul 08, 2007

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poet_inside

18 years 11 months ago

Dream Screams

Reminds my of my fiancee, you definately have a way with words. I absolutely loved the ending, when there are two that become one there is nothing they don't share , the point came across thick in just the last line. The title was very creative and suited the poem very well.
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Prototype

18 years 9 months ago

Simply lovely

Good poem, you have a very nice way to show your dedication. Most people only write about the share of "sweet dreams". People tend to ignore the existence of "nightmares". Keep up!

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