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Jul 09, 2007
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on path
to be kind to others
I often try—
and then, to my surprise,
prevail to cry:
as I approached, late yesterday,
a woodsy crossing path,
I yielded proper right-of-way
to a passing butterfly.
I swear she nodded gratefully
as she zigzagged her way
(and did so
so very cheerfully)
right on by.
— barbsdad2003, Jul 09, 2007
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Rottiestyl
18 years 11 months ago
This piece says
barbsdad2003
18 years 11 months ago
My thanx ...
Conect11
18 years 11 months ago
yeah,
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