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Jul 09, 2007
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A MASTER AND A LITTLE BOY
A Master And A Little Boy
He is the master of forty kids
taking lessons with a smile
his face seems to be a velvette rose
his smile is a magnet to attract the kids
no weeping and no crying with him
a loud noise out of glee is there
he forgets every thing with them
that garden is a place of heaven to him
a small boy came to his eyes
with full of fear and sorrow to release
he welcommed and take his burden
the little boy has his glee and
the master lost his smile and peace
he prayed the lord to have all sorows
and asked him to change their pains
Sakthi Ravi Chandran
AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET
— SAKTHEEE2007, Jul 09, 2007
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