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Jul 09, 2007
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breakfast~lunch~sup
let’s make it simpleton:
how about we take our
breakfast at Wimbledon?
early lunch, then, at Philly’s Tiffany’s,
then sup late at New York’s Sotheby’s.
for a nightcap, you suggest
on my behalf, at my behest.
and as for midday snacks in Santa Cruz,
you can also choose.
though I’d rather not be seen
at Ronald McDonald’s … or Applebee’s.
neither haunt will serve my preferenced booze.
— barbsdad2003, Jul 09, 2007
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