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barbsdad2003
Jul 10, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

bliss/kiss/kriss/hiss/diss

my bliss?

a kiss

 

from Kriss

 

with no

subse-

 

quent hiss

or diss.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 10, 2007

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Conect11

17 years 5 months ago

grabbing my shovel

because your work should never be buried :) I love this early piece of your whimsy, before such fetid things like structure took hold of us. Mark W.

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