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Jul 10, 2007
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roads
like
turtles
doze
tight-lipped
in
summer’s
smirking
sun;
though for
tracks so
matching
those,
it’s
not
nearly
as much
fun.
but
I do
for one
suppose
none
for
sure
truly
knows.
— barbsdad2003, Jul 10, 2007
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