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barbsdad2003
Jul 11, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

We Plunge

Our plugged toilet

We plunge

 

Our clotted waste

To expunge

 

To feed the lake’s

Voracious

 

Muskellunge.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 11, 2007

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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

now..

this...is...my friend...pure SHIT!!! lol, I love it! I've never seen someone write about, erm, CRAP! with such enthusiasm. so circumsion, checking out ladies by your dresser and now plugged toilets. Damn I hope I have your enthusiasm when I'm 40, let alone pushin 70! Mark

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