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Jul 11, 2007
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they are no more
I used to watch the silver
salmons race to spawn
upriver by the light of dawn.
in such a hurry, they would
cause infrequent water spray
in hopes they’d not miss
their spawning day.
now they are no more,
I’m quite sad to say.
— barbsdad2003, Jul 11, 2007
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