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Jul 13, 2007
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Dear Ann
Oh, my poor dear Ann,
She’s so badly hurt.
You go on ahead, dear Burt.
Just don’t you worry—
And do not tarry.
I’ll take caravan
And unhurt Mary.
— barbsdad2003, Jul 13, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
I never know how deep your work is
barbsdad2003
18 years 11 months ago
To Jess: As to the Title of Your Comment
Conect11
18 years 11 months ago
you are
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