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Jul 13, 2007
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Contraction/Expansion
Contraction
Night has fallen
And tripped me up.
I fell in bed
Without my sup.
I dream of horse
Called Buttercup;
And morn will come,
I trust … gid’yup!
Expansion
Birds stopped callin’.
Night has fallen
And tripped me up.
I fell in bed
With sleepy head
Without my sup.
It’s sans remorse
I dream of horse
Called Buttercup;
And morn will come—
Sardoodledum!—
I trust … gid’yup!
— barbsdad2003, Jul 13, 2007
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Spirit Song
18 years 11 months ago
Whimsical
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