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barbsdad2003
Jul 14, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

and thus

chance favors

the well-prepared mime

 

who makes the fewer mistakes

in his unversed outtakes

 

and can open up his heart

to a higher form of art

 

and thus more

kinetically rhyme.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 14, 2007

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Quillsvein1

18 years 11 months ago

meticulously crafted

Your obvious craftmanship is present here--and you seem to be writing about craft itself as well. This is a refreshing hymn to the artist's need for discipline and receptivity above all--to the universe and to everything around him. Excellent poem!
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barbsdad2003

18 years 11 months ago

Thank You

And you got, I think, the full import of the piece. Regards, Chuck

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