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no idea

I’ve no idea how much

all the paper weighs

 

that lies so heavily upon

my cluttered desk.

 

please tell me,

my dear friend, sir,

 

why you persist in asking

for my paper weight.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 14, 2007

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barbsdad2003

18 years 11 months ago

Thanx, Jess

But the point of the piece has nothing to do with the weight of the papers. Or demands made on me by them. Yours, Chuck
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poet_inside

18 years 11 months ago

Very cute

I like it with a little bit of twist of the begining to the end. It was cute and simple enough to make me smile, so to me thats a good job!

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