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With Cain

This son’s intrepid,

That one more tepid.

 

This son walks with Cain

When he is Abel.

 

That one works to live;

He waits at table.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 17, 2007

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chronecro

18 years 10 months ago

cain and abel

Not bad. More words, please.

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