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Jul 17, 2007
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Forbidden Lovers
Legs crossed..
In the dark…
Curved body arched…
I wish I could say no,
but in the midst somewhere between lust and passion,
I’m lost and I can’t let you go.
Bare chest…
Hands tightly clutch…
As roaming fingers linger…
I want you to stop,
but my body betrays me,
as I boldly climb on top.
Ripped skirt…
Legs locked…
Fighting for control…
Your trying to be sweet,
but in truth thats not want I want.
Despite myself I still cling to you… so make it rough.
— Alijandra, Jul 17, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
You are a brave, beautiful, accomplished poet
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Mama Mia
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18 years 10 months ago
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