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barbsdad2003
Jul 19, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Oh, No!

 

“Oh, my!”

I cry.

 

“Is your

bungalow

 

or high?”

 

“Oh, no!”

he says.

 

“Where does

your assembled

 

archipelago?

 

I’d really

very much

 

like tonneau.”

— barbsdad2003, Jul 19, 2007

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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

I highly

highly, HIGHLY (that is in a soprano voice) recommend that you check out the fantastic Cleveland poet Christopher Franke. (I'm sure his stuff can be found with a quick browse of the net.) This piece is so evocative of him. Mark

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