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barbsdad2003
Jul 20, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

pa in the raw

 

a couple of times
in old summer climes

we thought we saw
our pa in the raw.

it was but bare glimpse
by us little imps.

 

it was just enough
of pa in the buff

that we couldn’t see,
we did all agree,

 

why dear old ma
would like what she saw

in dear old pa.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 20, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

A classic!

I bet almost everyone can relate to this. On a more poignant level, there is a wedding photo of my parents and every time I see it I think "what did this gorgeous babe (at that age she looked like a young Elizabeth Taylor) see in that dweeb? cheers, Jess

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