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barbsdad2003
Jul 23, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Too Late!

 

I just could not get it up

Under Niagara

 

While lacking the assistance

Of my Viagra,

 

So I visited a drugstore

To buy me some more.

 

But—too late!—my lady

Earlier had brought,

 

Without a second thought,

Her proven edificator,

 

Her faithful vibrator.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 23, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

Chuckle out loud

again I wonder how strange my flatmates think I am, sitting in my room Chuckling aloud or groaning and swearing or crying. It's just NeoPoet, I could say, but that would not explain. Oh, by the way, loved this Chuck, that vibrator is a more reliable replacement than viagra, woe. cheers, Jess

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