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On a Dark Night

 

The weather, chizzly,

Turned awfully, awfully grisly

 

On a recent dark

And stormy night.

 

It thus made worse

My sadsome plight

 

From simply being

Locked out of doors

 

All the livelong night.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 26, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

eeeek!

experience and/or allegory? don't answer, works both ways. cheers, Jess

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