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Jul 26, 2007
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so-called garden
it’s quite plain to me
the Garden so-called Eden
was ne'er a cared-for garden.
no, not at all.
indeed, it took the form
of primevous wilds:
of such as forests dark,
of mountains, valleys,
and of calling sweetly forest lark.
and of all the things
that in truth we chose
to lose so long ago.
we plant only,
in their stead, those terrible
things malignant that
uniquely grow/expand/pollute
and ought to die …
but never do.
— barbsdad2003, Jul 26, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
You have mastered the art
barbsdad2003
18 years 10 months ago
Hey, Jess!
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
so true
barbsdad2003
18 years 10 months ago
Come to Think of It
Mark
18 years 10 months ago
best time
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