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Jul 28, 2007
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WW1: A Desert Heart
A mother’s heart
skips a beat
A son’s dishonesty,
true age wrong.
His war ship has
come in.
Will he board
will he won’t.
Lied to his mother
Lied to his friends.
Where is his father?
AT WAR!!!
— Fleur MacDonald, Jul 28, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
simply and ghastly expressed
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