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Jul 28, 2007
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Circumscribed
With all our country’s wealth,
Our lives come wretched,
Circumscribed by our ill health.
As we grow older,
Our global warming
Makes our sunset winters colder.
— barbsdad2003, Jul 28, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
right on! brother
purplemoondoll
18 years 10 months ago
Absolutely!
poet_inside
18 years 10 months ago
;*)
Mark
18 years 10 months ago
Nice
Mark
18 years 10 months ago
need to say
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