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barbsdad2003
Jul 28, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

While in Repose

 

Jen doffed her clothes

In a field of cloves

 

The bettermost

To sniff a rose

 

While resting in repose.

 

When a spider

Sat down beside her,

 

She froze.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 28, 2007

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poet_inside

18 years 10 months ago

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It has its own tist I like it!!!! Its nice to take something and renew it which I think you totally accomplished that here!!!

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