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A BROKEN WATCH AND MY SENTIMENTS

  A BROKEN WATCH AND MY SENTIMENTS
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Is it broken when and how?
these are not from my lips
They are from the depth of my pained heart
cause that broken watch  has such value
Many good things happened in it’s life to me
It gave distinction in my studies  and
it gave a lover and wife to my life.
It might be dim  and shabby to see but
it worked for me for many decades
My last son and first daughter loved towear
Such watch has broken and went for it’s rest
I stunned and broken for it’s death  and
placed as antique in the iron safe

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN  AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Jul 31, 2007

Critiques

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barbsdad2003

18 years 10 months ago

Ravi:

I'm blessed by my reading of your sentiment here. Thanx, Grandpa
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SAKTHEEE2007

18 years 10 months ago

TAHANKS GRANDPA

dear grandpa well and wish to hear the same from you Plwase write howfar have developed in poetry presentations? what aught to be and what aught not to be> PLEASE CAUSE ENGLISH IS NOT MY MOTHER LANGUAGE REQUEST FROM RAVEE

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