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To Aptly Sleep

 

Come quick! quick!

Check your breath:

 

The air, quite sick,

Makes our lungs come thick.

 

Though we die but slowly,

We will surely die.

 

Oh, my! oh, my!

I cry, I cry.

 

But when we’re dead,

We’ll then be right.

 

At least we’ll aptly sleep

When day’s gone night.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 31, 2007

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Quillsvein1

18 years 10 months ago

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love the cheerful way you can portray even that supposedly darkest of all dark things, the inevitable demise of us all. we will be right indeed...great job! humorous AND chilling.

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