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Aug 01, 2007
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MY MEMORIES WITH HER
MY MEMORIES WITH HER
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I was eighteen aged prince of my class
Every one of class were in my squad
None would opposed me
There she entered as a metaphor of beauty
Iwas left alone and isolated
Everyone turned as her worshippers
to attain her love and to speak with her
My lonely seperation made an wound and
that wound inspired myart of poetry
My place and my poemswere highlighted
on the occassion of school day
Yes she came and admired my poetry as outstanding
Finished everything had finished there
But my love on her
continued form that days to still now
Booma, the name that conquered me from my eighteen
to my present fortythree.
It will continue after sixty too.
sorry it will come up to my last sleep
SAKTHEE RAVICHANDRAN AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET
— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 01, 2007
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Critiques
Judith
18 years 10 months ago
Nice work, I like your story
purplemoondoll
18 years 10 months ago
Lovely Story Telling
SAKTHEEE2007
18 years 10 months ago
SO KIND OF YOU
Will Searles Carman
18 years 8 months ago
My Memories With Her
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