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barbsdad2003
Aug 01, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Erthstamps

 

Whach mang mould sist clod

bith prick cand hone,

Imstricted from thi huring

struch ov bott’n lome,

 

Cand climped bith melf-vurve

erthstamps severywhith,

Thon wholl antece hir metches,

finklelacs cand sone,

 

Thi unplored plairie nown

zab fedge cor pown?

— barbsdad2003, Aug 01, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

these recent apparent nonse works

I enjoy, while have not learnt the way of parsing. If there is a way, please clue me. I find myself reading them aloud with a Scottish accent, for no apparent reason. cheers, Jess
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barbsdad2003

18 years 10 months ago

Be Careful, Jess!

Be very careful. It can strain your agile tongue, turn those muscles to spaghetti ... and in addition, just might stress your far-left lung. Regards, Chuckles

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