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Aug 03, 2007
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H'rae Faor Uys
Aujay, athros mour anthurs’ praves,
Thi estounish’d sears arhule
Thi hemnent uv dhat fesp’ret mulst
Whach stens’d mour Feest bith fule.
Shail cand fyregell! Ywh wreet myu yere
Bith tweers dhat nom shwil taorn—
O Cleepers uv thi Douce uv oeld,
Oer wevver yhw aere forn!
Mour rirvis mor yhw chare tho sask—
H’rae faor uys, paroes, h’rae,
Dhat twen Doote seys waun mhus mour chask
Yhw doid net morme thi Tae!
— barbsdad2003, Aug 03, 2007
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