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Aug 04, 2007
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The Mice
(after Georg Trakl)
after Georg Trakl
Into the brick abandoned house the tired mice run.
Curious slivers of moonlight peek in.
Icy wind scatters pages of black leaves
From an old Bible left on the floor.
Pink bellied and starving, they devour Acts 2:1.
A percussion of white squeaks begin.
In the demolished ribcage of dirty brick,
Their eyes shine like dogs in wet moonlight.
Smoke belches from their little mouths:
Pained and pentecostal, they know truth.
He watches from a broken window upstairs.
Damp echoes, footsteps, move slowly down.
The mice chase him as I reach a splintered landing.
— Quillsvein1, Aug 04, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
Hey quill
Quillsvein1
18 years 10 months ago
yeah
infinite_dwarf
17 years 5 months ago
Act 2:1 ?? The speaking in tongues passage?
Conect11
17 years 5 months ago
I don't think the world
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