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Light and Air

 

Though it ought be

Fantasy

 

Sans risk of trendy

Tragedy,

 

Our brains do sculpt

In deed and thought

 

What should be there—

And’s really not—

 

Most anywhere

There’s light and air.

— barbsdad2003, Aug 08, 2007

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Lenny of Cohen

18 years 10 months ago

Hypnotic

Your poem had me in a trance, WOW, Chuck you certainly have me as a fan. Lenny
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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Spot on

Yes! This is awesome! kaz x

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