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Aug 08, 2007
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Light and Air
Though it ought be
Fantasy
Sans risk of trendy
Tragedy,
Our brains do sculpt
In deed and thought
What should be there—
And’s really not—
Most anywhere
There’s light and air.
— barbsdad2003, Aug 08, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
yes, we do
Lenny of Cohen
18 years 10 months ago
Hypnotic
purplemoondoll
18 years 10 months ago
Spot on
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