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The Target

forever is a word
often said
and
never meant
yet often heard

when
it lands
inside the
targets mind

it sets off
a train reaction

you can see
light
in the targets eyes
and you
become shocked
when
a smile
washes its way
onto the once
emotionless face

alas
when it is used
with glib preperation
you will find
on closer inspection
bullet wounds
have pierced each letter

on their way
to destroying
and then murdering
a once happy
loving soul

(C) 10.8.2007 Lenny Gazbowski

— Lenny of Cohen, Aug 10, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

Eeeeeek!

screeches the Jess, patting his many entry and exit wounds and shrinking in shame at the memories of the ones he has made. cheers, Jess
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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Ouch!

The opening lines set the scene and the rest hit 'right between the eyes' - very perceptive and nice writing style. really enjoyed this! cheers, kaz x

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